Strong school culture results faculty and staff who are:
More adaptable to change;
Higher motivation;
More commitment;
More cooperation and collaboration;
Better able to resolve conflicts;
Greater capacity for innovation; and
Effective in achieving goals.
There is something called parallel structure, which this list does not maintain. Read the sentence--from Strong school culture--through to the end of each bullet point, one at a time.)
...faculty and staff who are higher motivation?
More of the bullets don't work than do.
Oh, and never mind the "results faculty." I assume they left out a word there.
Let's give them a pass on the grammar. What does this even say, after all? What is strong school culture? How would we know it when we see it?
I don't mind mistakes...I make plenty of them, and they're good learning devices. I am distressed, however, that the people so adamantly telling us they've got all this figured about with Common Core would make such mistakes.
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